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Score: 0 / 10
Summary: a big fat zero.
Review: Author's Response:

Hard to take any serious advice from someone who's balls dropped two weeks ago.
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from the LOOKS of these replies, youre a cunt who cant take any criticism. im not personally insulting you because 'from the LOOKS'. so dont bother flagging this review which will probably be helpful to you if you actually bother to listen to it.

i dont see anything funny at all. 'THE MEXICANS'. thats as close as i got to actually thinking of a smile. ill break this down into parts so i dont get lost myself.

animation/art: the art was very plain and generic. and just a big ol' eyesore. the lipsync was pretty horrible and you used the line-tool pretty irresponsibly. the tweens were very sloppy. the frame by frame was too. so the whole thing was pretty sloppy. those hands were godawful. seriously. its like someone took family guy and stuck 'em in a blender. that style of drawing has been done more times than i can count or even remember. find a style. and if this IS your style, thats pretty sorry.

story/writing: again, i couldnt find anything funny about this at all. ive played the game. ive played a lot of the game. its a good game. this isnt a good parody. the first 'joke' was that dragged on intro that was never funny to begin with when it was done by every single other flash attempting to be funny. the rest, you mostly resorted to saying 'fuck' a lot to try and get a laugh out of the viewers. and you succeeded with a lot of people. that joke that most people keep fucking quoting in there reviews, the 'fuck you youre cool' is stolen. not only has it been stolen by you, but tons of other people. i know parodies arent supposed to be very original, but honestly. its like you sucked the brain out of a 12 year old and drew all the pretty little images and wrote out all their fantasies.

no worries for you though. this will get an award in no time. beating other flashes that deserve it more. great job.
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lol see what i did.

VALENTINE BALL Z.

i did some other stuff too. in fact ill LIST 'em for y0 br0's and h0's and muth0's.

surgery of silliness
the decayed northern camp
and uh this

so hows mah people.

latino-toid says:

ur retard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Feb. 10, 2009 | 7:02 PM Fawx responds:

lol.
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latino-toid says:

RETARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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peepee.

im kidding. theyre pretty cool. id like to have khale or metal gear funnies win. tom did a good job selecting the judges :).

sup.

i spent a whole DAY organizing an epic collab. the guidelines were to use a certain graphic and make something funny.

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/
481300

in other news, this flash is going to take longer than i thought. A LOT longer. so hold on to yo butts.

now to close this post, heres a picture of oney when he was a kid.

due to legal issues.

oops i forgot when i get to front page post lol.

chillin.

ps. working on a new flash. non-spam.

[9:30:46 PM] pick my corn says: its called timing
[9:30:49 PM] Khawner says: timing
[9:30:51 PM] pick my corn says: something you wouldnt understand
[9:30:55 PM] pick my corn says: and spacing
[9:30:59 PM] Khawner says: actually i am very intrigued
[9:31:01 PM] pick my corn says: another thing you wouldnt understand
[9:31:06 PM] Khawner says: proceed with your "timing"
[9:31:16 PM] pick my corn says: how about instead
[9:31:23 PM] pick my corn says: you read 'the animator's survival guide'
[9:31:33 PM] Khawner says: how bout instead, you tell me what your talking bout
[9:31:43 PM] Khawner says: so i can skip reading some bullshit
[9:32:10 PM] Khawner says: besides, if this is how to make fbf choppy
[9:32:19 PM] Khawner says: than its obviously not important
[9:32:25 PM] pick my corn says: ...
[9:32:27 PM] pick my corn says: wow

sorry i havent been able to produce more spam lately. ive been swamped with the end of the semester and im working on much bigger and better projects. so sorry to all my fans.