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[My foaken rlc part 1]

lol pretty shitty :(.

sorry. heres some critique.

animation: its bad. that is, where there was animation. most of these were just animated gifs to music. that stickman one was actually the worst. people dont run like that. so fix you walk cycles. i suggest studying someone or recording yourself walking and work off that. second of all, your tweens. they look just plain bad. you should know what to and what not to tween. that bouncing your head thing for example. you shouldve made the neck a seperate layer, and the head a layer above it. then make the head bob up and down. anyway. those are just suggestions.

the rest: yeah pretty shitty. especially that 4chan shit. that was awful.

so keep working.

Ludamage responds:

Ok! In anyway thanx.....4chan is shit?......roflmao ^_^

[I can do alotta voices]

lol cool beans.

youve like went a step down with the lipsync though.

DONT WORRY I STILL LOVE YOU.

Kyaztro responds:

I'm getting tired of actual lip syncing, I did all of this in less than 20 minutes as opposed to 3 HOURS!!! but love is all you need

[Steve The Magic Turtle]

yessssss.

front page front page.

Kyaztro responds:

front page? oh no no no, that's being reserved for left4lol and that one where that
piece of chocolate gets raped by a heart.

[a tweenless animation 2]

whoa.

damn son. much better than the first WHICH IS MINE. youre timing is a lot better and the song made me go B). i really cant think of anything to improve on. this was great.

PEOPLE LIKED THE FIRST?! WAT?!

SonicProvision responds:

lol every movement that was with teh beat was just accidently lol
glad u liked it but 1 is betta

[The halloween commercial]

bad.

-humor: 0
-art/animation: 0
-skjfkdjgkfdjhfhd: 0

the only reason this has a one is because its your first flash. heres some tips. and if i were you and you were really trying to learn flash i would listen to them.

sound. sound is a necessity. you couldve done any song from the audio portal or anything. but you need sound. make a new layer after youve imported the song into the library. click the long keyframe, open properties and select the sound.

you tried fbf. cool. but are you using onion skin?

from my point of view it looks like you need a higher frame rate. or fps. may i suggest 24.

your drawings are very sloppily done. and it looks like some kind of spin-off of invader zim, in whos style i didnt like much in the first place.

keep on truckin.

latino-toid responds:

WOOOOO it'z u XD
about that can you tell me what look like an iz spin-off???
wut....is....fbf????
about higher frame i ditn understand what u are talking about.......
thankz for teh comment.

[If You Were Gay, Roy]

ugh...

ive seen this style used by hundreds of other people. ive heard this song in hundreds of other videos. ive seen those characters more than enough. you have japfags, weaboos, and 12 year old kids eating out the palm of your hand. and i didnt enjoy. not because im a jerk with no sense of humor. but because this is really unoriginal and unfunny. you could either develop your own real style like some of those who left reviews on this. such as RWappin or Gonzossm. or, you can make your own characters and ideas. and then again, theres always stop making flash altogether. but thatd be discouraging.

how much more of these japanese fads can be abused before we all cant take it.

Nami-Tsuki responds:

I hate the people eating out of my hand... I did this because it was fun, I never expected it to be so popular.

[Sketchy Friends Dance]

gee whiz!

this sure was fun!

TheBoogley responds:

gee willickers, I just hit my baseball into your yard mr Wilson! :3

[Paperbat's Bday Phun!]

haha.

that was great. i liked wasim's part a lot. -1 points because it has to do with paperbat :(.

Emanhattan responds:

I voted 2

[Pokemon Awesome edition]

lmao.

wow is it me or does newgrounds just not understand satire.

peanutbutterclawk responds:

I dunno what a satire is but this is a lampoon but egoraptor did steal this idea from me i did it first

[Teddy Bear Fight!!!!]

that was a fight?

it looked more like some kind of seizure enduced orgy.

Little-Red-Bear responds:

ha ha