Fawx's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Big Heads Episode 2]

you work fast.

sound quality in a lot of places was really bad. animation has too many tweens and looks unorganized. okay yeah.

oldlyshapedchris responds:

i dont think that tweening is a bad thing. and yes i used two weeks.

[The big heads episode 1]

cool.

still need practice.

oldlyshapedchris responds:

lucifers donkey

[Pokémon XD parody]

wow.

alright that was downright awful and i dont think i even need to give constructive criticism for anyone to realize that. you mashed up a bunch of 4chan memes and anime/video-game references to make up for you lack of creativity and humor. you tweened mostly everything around and it needed more music in more parts.

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

[: Tech Support V :]

i honestly do not see the appeal in this.

you have two horrific looking characters, talking about something. one of them keeps saying 'fuck' over and over to try and force a laugh out of the audience. the other one is there not having any movement, not even lipsync. and arguing to the other character about something. and you have these shitty overused animations with the tech support character. why is he even making those movements? the squirrel isnt in front of him. this makes the tech support character look retarded as all fuck. also, people dont blink fifty times a second. the shitty blink animations were the most distracting pieces of shit throughout this whole thing. and the lipsync is the worst part. have you ever even seen someone talk? read peoples lips and maybe your terrible mouth-movements might not be so terrible.

i absolutely, do not see the appeal in foamy.

[Mr. Adams]

hmm.

alright so imma break this review in parts.

animation/art:

it was all around shitty. the first thing that sparked it was the lipsync. you have one mouth graphic, tweening it around it different shapes. and when you do that, the shape gets distorted and it looks really ugly and just doesn't work. and drawings looked like they came out of a third grader's comic book. i guess basically the character designs were horrific. and the brush strokes were the faulty of them mostly. it looks like you drew something, and instead of pressing ctrl+z, you erased the mistake and redrew. which leaves obvious traces. unless youre using pressure, and i assume youre using a mouse because of the drawings. if you want to continue just using tweens, at least use easing. it makes them look a lot smoother and cleaner. but it wont really help you because you general animation-sense is off. i suggest reading books, classes, or just practicing. and the subtitles just straight up looked wrong.

story:

this is probably worse than the art and animation. it was something ive seen before. a lot. actually, you made the general idea for those kind of stories but even stupider. i truly truly hope i never see anything like this again. it bored me with all the cliches, and the visuals made me closer to pushing the x. unfortunately, i didnt. because i THOUGHT that something better would happen. ive never liked any of your stories with any of your flashes. theyre full of cliches and just not funny or clever. i wouldnt suggest taking a writing class or anything, but just think of better ideas. so storytelling is probably something you should work on more than art and animation. because if you have shitty animation to something funny or clever, i can at least cope.

voice-acting: i usually dont add this, but youre voice-acting is horrific. it sounds unnatural and all the voices sound the same. a professional, or at least an aspiring voice actor needs to learn to change his/her voice to fit the character. shit, im fourteen years old and i can do all kinds of impressions. i just never voice-act for my cartoons because my voice is all nasally and shit.

2/10
1/5

ICYCREWPRODUCTIONS responds:

Well if it isn't the allmighty fawx letting the lesser-gifted people a piece of his mind?
Dude, I don't take voice acting suggestions from a little boy that's to afraid to put his voice out for people to hear.
Second of all, I did not tween the mouths, its fbf.
And this is not some well-worked project I've been working on for months, i made it to get back into animating.
I never tween expect for when its some kind of zoom, etc.
Animating with tweens is a lazy mans way, well I guess you should know all about that.

And to throw shit at other flashes I made is just totally irrelevant and just shows what a douchebag you really are.

I see absolutely NOTHING helpfull with your review and therefor take it that you wrote this just to be an asshole and to let me know how much you hate it.

Well I guess this is why you're such a little scrawny bitch irl, it makes you think that you have to act all bad and etc on the net.

I really suggest that you keep your reviews to yourself and never come near any of my work again.

[Pixtropolis City]

cool.

nicholas deary fucked up my bio message though. -2.

[Rock Hard Roy Ep.1]

Poor

The animation was poor and lacked any real storyline
try writing the animation first, and spending more time animating it, hopefully you'll produce better flashes.
as for this one the quality was extremely poor.

TheDeathReaperIsBack responds:

Seems like you've just copied my review i gave you, just because your flash was..

[TheCollectionOfPerfection]

oh god.

that link one.

MMMMMMMMM.

RainbowRiderOmega responds:

Link has to use the triforce

[demoreel V2: Sand edition]

DONT DELETE THIS ONE.

OKAY

okay

brilliant.

[My foaken rlc part 1]

lol pretty shitty :(.

sorry. heres some critique.

animation: its bad. that is, where there was animation. most of these were just animated gifs to music. that stickman one was actually the worst. people dont run like that. so fix you walk cycles. i suggest studying someone or recording yourself walking and work off that. second of all, your tweens. they look just plain bad. you should know what to and what not to tween. that bouncing your head thing for example. you shouldve made the neck a seperate layer, and the head a layer above it. then make the head bob up and down. anyway. those are just suggestions.

the rest: yeah pretty shitty. especially that 4chan shit. that was awful.

so keep working.

Ludamage responds:

Ok! In anyway thanx.....4chan is shit?......roflmao ^_^